After the first poem i wrote people wanted another this is my second called beyond friendship what you think?

Question

Friends we became close we have got
You’ve told me things that to others you have not
You feel secure and safe when I’m around
I know I will never let you down
But as time went by Things started to grow
So I left it and just went with the flow
This was a mistake I made on my behalf
I let my guard down and now I’m only half
When I’m with you I feel whole again
I’m happy even when my hearts in the rain
I know things you have done and the mistakes you have made
But the feeling just grew and never did fade
I know you for who you are
And yet you are still my shining star
Your eyes saw through my gates of steel
They pierced my heart and made me feel
Your beautiful beyond belief
Your looks give me a sigh of relief
Each time I think that I can be stunned no more
You turn up at knocking at my door
You look more stunning as each day goes by
I’m left breathless and really shy
You’re a special girl and I know that’s true
There’s not anything in this world I wouldn’t do for you

Answer 1

Well done, save it for next Valentines day!!!!! LOL

Answer 2

Excellent, Fantabulous. brilliant poem. but i'd advice u (sorry if ur 15yrs or above) 2 reformat the 2nd last line the girl part. suppose if a boy who is ur best of friends reads and after coming to its end, finds out ur writing 4 a girl, how he will feel? he will be hurt.

better transform into this:



You're a special person an i know that's true

there's nothing in this world I won't do for you

Answer 3

Beautiful poem :)

Answer 4

BEAUTIFUL! i love it i really feel what your saying in this

Answer 5

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